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| this is pretty dumb i know how everyone thinks this is good and it will limit drunk driving but think of the effects that drinkin will have on kids IN HIGH SCHOOL!!! i dont want a senior in high school goin to buy alcohol i know i come off strong but guess what, ive been on both sides here, in fact, i got busted for drinkin 3 times my first year of college and there is no mercy in fairfax county where i live but for society, this would be terrible to lower the drinkin age and suspending a license for ten years would never last in this country, people would protest it b/c everyone makes dumb decisions when theyre drunk |
| Good point, but not very well written and a bit self-contradictory towards the end. Though moderation may seem like the fair way to go, in persuasive essays you have either avoid these counter-points or do a better job of completely nullifying them with an argument. |
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But in response to your essay, you really need to re-write some parts, it's way too wordy. I completely agree with your opinion that "if you can die for your country, why can't you have a drink?" COMPLETELY agree. |
| The legal age for consumption should be less than the legal age to obtain a driver's liscense. It is absurd to allow people to drive before they know how even one alcoholic beverage will affect them. Alcohol isn't a substance I'd recommend for consumption by anyone, even in small amounts, but I fully support your right to drink yourself to sleep. |
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this is why they give a ton of education about alcohol and driving before u start driving unless u dont wanna drive until ur 22, i wouldnt change the laws |
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