editing advice/comments on sample

i haven't edited in a long time. this doesn't have any effects in it really i was just trying to edit it. anyway tell me what you think please, i would like any advice/comments.

http://youtu.be/zDKeWvteb5o

You're fucking alive. Holy shit. You might want to visit this thread:

Zola is looking for the 10 Best Halo Editors for New Project.

EDIT: Such a sick vid Dweller, glad you're back.

02:11 PM

and Im back to missing h2 again....

good to see your face again man.
thought the editing was very nice, very subtle stuff with the cuts/trans. hard to get into it when its so short but it's deff very clean. cant say much on clip placement cuz I dont know what you have. Last clip was sweet, loved how the audio made it feel competitive + the nade throw -> guy exploding was a nice touch.
always like how you work with brightness, 0:21 was sweet.
gj

The triple at 0:12 looked way too forced to sync, which looks bad imo. The slow midship ffa clip was boring because it was slowmotion instead of normal speed. Last clip was awesome, including the edit and voice output.

Wow that was amazing.

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Originally Posted by MuFf1n

The triple at 0:12 looked way too forced to sync, which looks bad imo. The slow midship ffa clip was boring because it was slowmotion instead of normal speed. Last clip was awesome, including the edit and voice output.

yeah i didnt like the long midship clip i couldn't sync it right, but it doesn't look much more exciting in normal speed. the triple looked forced probably because it was a laggy clip. syncing clips with lag sucks you can't get it work right. thanks for the help though, i will probably take your advice on the midship clip and switch it for another or maybe 2. as for the triple i think i'm just going to add some effects to make it work.

Idk, didn't really like it for some reason. I have no clue why either. I'll edit my post when I find out.

To be fair the "laggy" clip (it's a forced slowmotion to sync), doesn't have to be like that. You could also just let the clip go 100% speed even after the double so you can actually see how fast the triple was achieved instead of taking it away by using a slowmotion. You can use the beat for a (fast) transition.

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Originally Posted by MuFf1n

To be fair the "laggy" clip (it's a forced slowmotion to sync), doesn't have to be like that. You could also just let the clip go 100% speed even after the double so you can actually see how fast the triple was achieved instead of taking it away by using a slowmotion. You can use the beat for a (fast) transition.

i watched it again and i think you are right. thanks for the help