I made this dualtage with a guy known as The Foofinator back in October. Afterwards I was referred here by a friend because he liked the editing in it so much.

The gameplay isn't as great compared to other montages, but we couldn't get any clips that were better. We used what we got and that was the end of it. If anyone has some advice on getting better clips, feel free to say it here.

As for editing, this was the second montage I edited in vegas, and there may be some moments where I miss a few beats in the sync. I think the effects and cinematography are good though and I made good transition after the first clip.

I know a lot of bloopers are obstructed by a huge wall of text but I think you should be able to still tell what's going on... This was before I figured out how to make scrolling credits.



I don't really want feedback on anything besides the gameplay (again this is an old montage, most of the editing flaws here are things that I've fixed in my later montages which you've already seen) The only real feedback I want from the gameplay is tips on getting better clips. For example, don't just say "work on your accuracy" but rather, tell me what I should do to improve my accuracy. Thanks.

simple and clean, nice

Thanks, that's exactly what I was going for.