I just made a new machinima video the other day and I would love for you all to check it out!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HwXqVrxjieU
I just made a new machinima video the other day and I would love for you all to check it out!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HwXqVrxjieU
I feel like there's better ways to emphasize certain scenes than just replaying it twice. You could have taken more time and chosen a better soundtrack with music that has high points in it to emphasize certain scenes. You can also emphasize it through editing, using certain color correction techniques, for another example.
Also, I don't get why the brother kills the victim in the first place, or why he just loses his memory. You don't just suddenly forget that you murder someone, and he just does it for seemingly no reason. It feels like one of these vids that would be better with proper dialogue. I'd know because I've recently made one with a similar issue.